From 61ed75c34975f485d4edb7310515cc607dab2cf0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Andrea Greco <11886092+Andreag00@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Sat, 10 Dec 2022 17:38:58 +0100 Subject: Grammar review of the whole wiki (#54) --- _ont/ont-odi-realtek-dfp-34x-2c2.md | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) (limited to '_ont/ont-odi-realtek-dfp-34x-2c2.md') diff --git a/_ont/ont-odi-realtek-dfp-34x-2c2.md b/_ont/ont-odi-realtek-dfp-34x-2c2.md index 67298c2..1f7cc29 100644 --- a/_ont/ont-odi-realtek-dfp-34x-2c2.md +++ b/_ont/ont-odi-realtek-dfp-34x-2c2.md @@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ parent: ODI | SSH | ✅ user `admin`, password `admin` | | Form Factor | miniONT SFP | -{% include alert.html content="SSH uses an outdated set of algorithm/ciphers, you can connect using the following command:" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} +{% include alert.html content="SSH uses an outdated set of algorithms/ciphers, you can connect using the following command:" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} ```shell ssh -oKexAlgorithms=+diffie-hellman-group1-sha1 -oCiphers=+3des-cbc admin@192.168.1.1 @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ ssh -oKexAlgorithms=+diffie-hellman-group1-sha1 -oCiphers=+3des-cbc admin@192.16 ## List of firmwares and files - [V1.0-220530 Modded](https://github.com/Anime4000/RTL960x/files/8821809/M114_sfp_ODI_hybrid_220527_stich86_220530.tar.zip){: .btn } - by [stich86](https://github.com/stich86) **SUGGESTED** since it has working VLAN translation. + by [stich86](https://github.com/stich86) **RECOMMENDED** because it has working VLAN translation. ## List of partitions @@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ ssh -oKexAlgorithms=+diffie-hellman-group1-sha1 -oCiphers=+3des-cbc admin@192.16 This stick supports dual boot. -`k0` and `r0` respectively contain the kernel and firmware of the first image, `k1` and `r1` the kernel and the firmware of the second one +`k0` and `r0` respectively contain the kernel and firmware of the first image, while `k1` and `r1` respectively contain the kernel and the firmware of the second one # Serial @@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ GPON_SN=TMBB00000000 ## Getting/Setting the ONT's PLOAM password -{% include alert.html content="The PLOAM password is stored in HEX format, with no 0x or separator" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} +{% include alert.html content="The PLOAM password is stored in HEX format, without any 0x or separators" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} ```sh # flash get GPON_PLOAM_PASSWD @@ -101,7 +101,7 @@ GPON_PLOAM_PASSWD=41414141414141414141 ## Getting/Setting the ONT Vendor ID -{% include alert.html content="this may need OMCI_OLT_MODE set to 3 to work" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} +{% include alert.html content="This may need the OMCI_OLT_MODE value to be set to 3 to work" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} ```sh # flash get PON_VENDOR_ID @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ PON_VENDOR_ID=ZTEG ``` ## Getting/Settng the ONT Custom software version -{% include alert.html content="this needs OMCI_OLT_MODE set to 3 and firmware 220530 modded by stich86" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} +{% include alert.html content="This needs the OMCI_OLT_MODE value to be set to 3 and firmware 220530 as modded by stich86" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} ```sh # nv setenv sw_custom_version0 YOURFIRSTSWVER @@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ PON_VENDOR_ID=ZTEG ``` ## Getting/Setting a custom HW Version -{% include alert.html content="this probably needs OMCI_OLT_MODE set to 3" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} +{% include alert.html content="This may need the OMCI_OLT_MODE value to be set to 3 to work" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} ```sh @@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ HW_HWVER=V2.0 ``` ## Getting/Setting a custom ONT Equipment ID -{% include alert.html content="this probably needs OMCI_OLT_MODE set to 3" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} +{% include alert.html content="This may need the OMCI_OLT_MODE value to be set to 3 to work" alert="Note" icon="svg-info" color="blue" %} ```sh # flash get GPON_ONU_MODEL GPON_ONU_MODEL=DFP-34X-2C2 -- cgit v1.2.3